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My Painted Woman
by Douglas Wallace

With the menu's unbroken spine lying in front of me
The waitress and her minor league breasts
Uniformed in a red T-shirt
Ask me what I would like

Sparing her the inadmissable details I opt for the immediate
"A pitcher and an ashtray, please"
I cast into her shallow eyes
Retrieving a soggy ponytail

I make a show of looking at my watch and staring at the door
Letting my face evolve from anticipation to concern
Lest the herd mistake my presence
And skittishly flee the pond

The pitcher is half empty and the ashtray is half full
By the time my love sits down across from me
With the sincerest apologies
From me, for being early

The waitress returns to deal a new hand of menus
Expecting better odds in this game
But we are both staying pat
"Just another mug, please"

It is only when my love lifts the beer to her lips that I notice
There is something terribly wrong with her hands
"What did you do to your nails?"
"Oh, I got manicure at lunch"

Before I even have a chance to comprehend this treachery
She nonchalantly reaches across the table
Digs those things into my jugular
And plucks out my Adam's apple

Pulling on her coat after wiping off her dripping hands
She looks with some pride upon the spots
"I knew that you wouldn't like them"
And leaves the check for my corpse.

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