Captivated
by greeneyedlady2k_2000





he day started out innocently enough; sun shining as usual; breeze blowin' through the trees; dogs pissin' on tires; you know, the usual stuff that happens on a Saturday. I was on my way to pick up my lil' bro and his new wife at the train station, my latest disc in the player. I always turn it up real loud when I go through the neighborhood; it really pisses people off!

I could see that the train had already pulled in by the time I rounded the corner at the Square, so I gave it a little more gas, and almost took out a couple of old ladies trying to cross against the light. When I pulled in to park, I saw that crazy brother of mine doing his damnedest to lift some lady's luggage off the porter's hand truck. She was really a beauty and I couldn't blame him for being helpful. I hadn't seen Willem since he had left for school back in September, and he looked like he'd grown up quite a lot since then. I didn't know if he recognized my car, so I jumped out and climbed the steps two at a time.

"Hey, bro!" I said with a slap on the back that made him drop the lady's suitcase on his foot, "Where do you think you're going with that lady's things?"

"Well, hey to you my brother!" Willem said with a grin as big as the cow-catcher on the old steam engine that was sitting on the plaza in front of the station. "That ain't no lady, that's my wife!" he said, trying desperately to imitate Henny Youngman, whom he was really too young to remember anyway.

Man, my jaw must have busted into a thousand pieces when it hit the concrete, because I really couldn't speak for a couple of minutes. "Sorry" was about all I could muster.

"S'okay, Jesse, I really didn't warn anybody." Willem apologized when he realized my distress." This is my wife, Elena. This is my old man of a brother, Jesse."

With that, she and I locked eyes in a gaze so intense I just about fell down there on the concrete with my jaw.

"It's a pleasure to meet you, Jesse. Willem has told me so much about you."

Her words spilled out of her mouth like so much honey, soft and sweet. And her dark grey eyes sparkled like the little waves that blow up on the surface of the lake when you are out in the middle and can't see the shore. She was absolutely gorgeous when you stopped to look. Long, long, long, dark brown hair that sort of spilled around her frame like a soft afghan throw; and, man, what a frame it was! She had to have been around forty, from what I could tell; you know, she had those soft little laugh lines that start to creep in around the eyes? But that was the only way you could even begin to guess her age. She was about 5-foot-6, and I guessed around 145 pounds. Her shoulders were broad, but not out of proportion with her hips. Her breasts, though covered by a fairly heavy T-shirt, were nicely rounded, and I could just make out her nipples under the fabric; oh, so fine. Her legs were incredibly shapely and long, and even her feet were sexy.

When I finally realized that she was extending her hand to shake mine, I must have blushed.

" Jesse, are you okay?" she asked, her voice calming and arousing at the same time.

" Oh. Yeah, I'm fine. It's, uh, really nice to meet you, too" I choked out a tad too harshly.

She gave me a quizzical look and bent to pick up her bags. I couldn't help myself, so I stared straight at her ass and saw the outline of her panties against the thin linen of her shorts. Oh, man, tent time for me. I turned away just as Willem saw me.

"Hey man," he whispered close to my ear, "That's my wife you're molesting with your eyes!"

" Sorry, guy" I muttered, "can't seem to help it right now"

"Well, just be careful, and I won't kill you!" he joked half-heartedly.

We spent the ride back to my house tossing pleasantries back and forth, Willem's hand ever present on Elena's leg. He said that they had met at a music festival at the college, "heavy metal, can you believe it?", and that they hadn't been apart since. She almost cooed in his ear, and opened her legs just enough to let him slide his hand between them at mid-thigh. Oh my god, I though I was gonna go nuts.

" Let's stop at the store.. what do you guys want for supper?" I asked, my words sounding like the were coming from somewhere other than my mouth. " I didn't know what to get, so there's not much at home."

"Sounds good!" Willem roared, as he stroked Elena's leg with a palpable urgency.

Too much intensity in that statement for me, I thought as I wheeled into the local market's lot. We all tumbled out of the car, and raced to be the first to grab a cart. Willem started pulling stuff off the shelves like a kid, and Elena, sounding motherly, kept saying, "Willem!", with the exasperation that only a mom can muster. As we continued our shopping, Elena came over to me, and putting her hand on the inside of mine on the cart's handle, pressed her breast into the back of my elbow.

" Let me push this thing while you guys load it up."

Of course, it was impossible for me to think about anything but how good her breast had felt on my arm, so God only knows what else I put into that cart.

We finally got all the groceries out to the car, my brain reeling with all sorts of things that I'd like to do to Elena if I had the chance. As we headed toward the house [again], Elena twisted around in the seat, tossing her hair gently across my shoulder and arm. She even smelled like sex...so warm and inviting. As she reached into the groceries in the back seat, her ass resting lightly on the dashboard, I saw Willem reach between her legs and caress her sex. Oh God, please just let me get this car home! I had a real hard time keeping it in between the stripes, but thankfully, there were only two blocks to go.

The house where I live is one of those old Victorian things, with drafts, and doors that stick, and windows that creak, but I like it, and it's cheap.

We stepped into the front hall with all the bags of groceries, and Elena chirped "Oh, this is gorgeous! I love this kind of house. I'll bet there's only one big bathroom upstairs, right? With one of those sexy footed tubs, huh?" I replied with a muffled "yeah" and tried to squeeze past her into the kitchen and she whispered excitedly into my ear, "Take me on a tour...Willem can put those away".

"Willem!" I hollered at the ceiling, "Willem, put these damn groceries away. I'll be back to fix us all eats in a few."

"'kay!", I heard him reply.

As I turned to ask Elena to follow me, I felt her grab my hand.

"Well, come on, show me around!" she pouted.

"Well," I started, "It's not much to look at...you know the rest of that one."

"That's okay," she said. "I want to see upstairs first anyway." Her eyes seemed to have a natural fire, and as I followed one step behind her on the stairs, I heard her say, "Would you go tell Willem to come here? Tell him to bring the green suitcase, okay?"

Man, dreams shattered again!

"Okay, I'll go start supper and send him up." It was hard to hide the disappointment, but if she noticed it, I couldn't tell.

"Hey, bro, your wife wants you. She said bring the green suitcase." I almost spit out the words at Willem. Oh, shit, I'm being jealous!

" Oh man, when she says the green suitcase, I am on the move! That green suitcase is my ticket!" Willem beamed.

"How so?", I asked, not really wanting to know. because I felt I knew already.

" Sex, my man, sex. Tons of it....Bye!" And he almost sprinted up the stairs, calling Elena's name every third step.

I knew I hadn't wanted to know. I set about trying to figure out what to have for dinner, but visions of Elena doing great things to my brother, were just too damn distracting. I debated with myself for quite some time on whether or not to sneak upstairs and just listen in. Pretty soon, I just couldn't say 'no' to me anymore. I tried to be as quiet as I could, but forgot about the third step; it always creaks like an old man's knees. I froze, unsure of whether to go up or down, and then when I didn't hear anything like feet comin' after me, proceeded to climb the stairs. My heart was pounding like 90 as I turned to go down the guest room hall. I heard the muted sounds of sex in the room.

Then I noticed that the door was open about two inches, and I knew that the bed was visible from the hall. The hard on creeping into my trousers was not going to be denied this opportunity, let me tell you! I could barely stop myself from letting out a moan, when my brain started racing ahead of my sight. As I neared the door, I sidestepped across the doorway, so I could look in from the other side.

When I looked into the room, Elena's eyes pierced me to my very soul. O god, she knows I'm here! But, when she didn't even miss a beat, I figured it had just been a coincidence, and she really hadn't seen me.

There she was, in complete and total control of Willem, who was licking and sucking her dark nipples with his back to the door. The look on her face was utter abandon, and as he sucked, she arched into him as if needing more contact with his mouth. At this point I was making enough static electricity by rubbing my cock through my pants to make four thousand balloons stick to the ceiling! 'This has got change' I said to myself, and slowly unfastened my belt. The button of my fly almost drove me crazy trying to get it undone, but the zipper flew down like an angel! All eight inches fell into my hand like a lead weight. 'Come, on Jesse, play with me. Jesse, look at those nipples!'; my cock had a life and a mind of it's own as I watched Elena and Willem.

Willem stood up and his cock seemed to fill even further when Elena took it in her hands and brought it toward her mouth. Eyes gazing into his, she slipped his cock into her mouth.

Slowly...very slowly.. so slowly, that I could actually feel her mouth on me as I watched. Man, she was good. As she filled her mouth with Willem, she reached between her legs and stroked her raven haired pussy with soft, furtive strokes. When he was fully in her mouth, she reversed the process... just as slowly as she took it in. Willem had to hold onto the canopy of the bed to stay steady, I saw his knees start to buckle under him a couple times. And I wasn't in much better shape out in the hall. I had stopped stroking my cock as soon as she started the 'reverse', but it didn't seem to matter.

The visuals were going to make me come all by themselves.

Elena only backed off of Willem's cock until it was only halfway in her mouth; then she slid it all the way back in one swift swallow. And just as swiftly back out again. She did this God only knows how many times, while Willem rocked on his heels and almost drooled. I had to turn my head for a few minutes, to keep my balance. I heard Willem say, "Elena", in the most animalistic voice I had ever heard, and turned to look again.

Elena was now standing in front of Willem with her face away from me. She backed into him, and seemed to flow over his cock like a smooth river. Without the use of her hands, she seemed to suck Willem into her like a sponge. His swollen cock slipping quietly into her beautiful slick cunt. She pushed herself onto him and began to ride him, to hump his cock, to fuck him with an unbridled frenzy. I squeezed my cock with my hand to keep from coming. I had to turn away again.

I heard Elena start to whimper. "Oh, Willem, oh, oh.."

I turned back, and saw her pull away, leaving his cock hard, and wet. She grasped his cock in her hand and licked the head clean. Willem was begging for her to let him lay down so she could be on top, so she grabbed his neck, kissed his mouth, and laid him down. His cock was so hard that you could've measured perpendicularity with it. It stood straight up, no leaning in any direction.

I looked down at my cock, and it was almost the same.

As I looked back up, our eyes met again.

This time I knew she had seen me. But the look I got from her was almost a demand. She wanted me to watch...'oh God, this is so perfect'.... I almost passed out.

When I recovered enough to breathe again, I saw her standing over Willem. She bent down letting her hair fall across him, and cover his face. He grabbed it with both hands and gently pulled her down. As she lowered her cunt over his cock, she cupped her breast in her hands, pinching her taut nipples, between her thumbs and forefingers. She gently bounced her breasts in her hands, feeling their weight, letting them hang just enough to make a slight tug on her nipples.

Willem's hands had found her pussy, and her clit, and he was delighting in his discovery. He pulled her cunt tight against his cock, and stroked her erect clit in small gentle circles. His back began to arch into her, as she pumped herself up and down on him. His eyes closed, and she looked at me.

I stumbled slightly, and the door opened a couple more inches. Fortunately, no squeaks.

She looked into my eyes, then trailed them across my face, my neck, my shoulders. She lowered her eyes onto my erection, flashed back to my eyes, and licked her lips as she sucked in a breath.

I felt my orgasm bubbling, starting it's search for release. I stroked my cock with long strokes, felt it's whole length in my hand. I looked back at Elena and heard Willem come with a guttural "Elena" that emanated from somewhere deep inside of him.

Elena rocked in earnest now, in and out she pumped him, as he still masturbated her. She tossed her head back and her hair fell over her like a waterfall. She stopped fucking him, leaned back resting on her knees with him still inside, and masturbated furiously.

I was following her lead with the rhythm, and getting so close to orgasm that I had to kneel down, lest I fall.
As I steadied myself with one hand, she looked at me again and said "I'm coming...oh, I'm coming....feel this...feel me come....."

I really could feel her coming, and I couldn't hold back anymore... I came all over myself; I came with a force I hadn't seen in years; I couldn't breathe. And when I could open my eyes again, she was gently rocking back and forth on the subsiding erection of Willem, and he was gently stroking her hair, her breasts and her stomach.

I sat there a little while longer, until I was sure I could walk without crashing into things.

She bent over Willem and kissed his forehead and his mouth with such a gentle passion, that I saw a tear roll down Willem's face. I picked up what was left of my drained body, and quietly went back downstairs.

I quickly found something to throw together for dinner, and had it almost done, when I heard them coming downstairs.

"Oh Willem, I'm sorry, would you be a dear and get my sandals from upstairs?" I heard her purr. As I heard Willem head back up the stairs, Elena entered the kitchen. She smiled a sweet smile at me and came to stand close.

" Jesse, I want to thank-you for one the most wonderful orgasms of my life." She whispered. " I knew you were there all along. I had been hoping you would come and watch."

My face turned hot as I said " I really just couldn't help it."

" I know." was all she said.

As we ate dinner, Willem would deftly reach under the table and to caress Elena's leg. She would smile a soft smile, and glance in my direction. Each time he touched her, she would look at me. As disconcerting as this may sound, I found myself enjoying the moment immensely.

"Elena?", Willem spoke quietly, his mouth close to her ear. " Could we go back upstairs?"

" Willem, we traveled a long way today. And we, uh, well you know. I'm kinda tired at the moment...." her voice trailed off into a delicious whisper.

Willem's face disintegrated into sadness. "Oh. Well, okay, I'll just, um, ...I'm going for a walk, if nobody minds." His hurtful tone was aimed straight at Elena. " I'll see you guys later."

We sat there for a long moment, neither of us knowing exactly what to say. The day's earlier events hung like a silver cloud that we didn't dare mention. I couldn't stop thinking about how she had looked me straight in the eye when she orgasmed. I was getting an erection right there at the table and it was time to clear the dishes.

"Ah, I guess I'd better get busy on the kitchen, it's kinda a mess." I finally broke the silence.

" No, Jesse, let me clean-up. Maybe I can get rid of some of this anger in the process" Elena's eyes flashed with fire. " Sometimes that brother of yours....."

"I'm sorry," Elena said quietly, "He just..well, he..ooh..Jesse"

She collapsed into the table with a sob, her hands grasping the edge to support herself. I saw tears roll down her soft cheeks and splash onto the dark cherry wood of the table.

"Oh, I'm sorry!" she quickly wiped the tears away, so they didn't leave salt trails on the wood. "I'm sorry, Jesse. I didn't mean to break down like that. It's just Willem and I, well, this afternoon was...... a novelty. We haven't had sex like that in awhile. I'm afraid he only wanted to prove something to you. He arranged all of that so you would come up and watch, so he could prove to himself that he's the 'better' brother. Or some such nonsense as that. I went along with it, especially after I saw you, but I feel bad that we tricked you like that. I was just so horny; I really was thinking of you when we were fucking." it all spilled from her in a torrent. "I'm sorry." She lowered her eyes and I saw a tear fall again.

Now I was confused. I wanted to reach out and comfort her, but this was my brother's wife; he had treated her like shit, even though they had just had glorious sex. I touched her face, and she looked up into my eyes. Her lower lip trembled, and she looked like a young girl who's heart had just been broken. My heart sank, as I realized just what Willem had done to her.

"Elena, do you need anything?" My voice was barely a whisper as she melted into my chest and laid her head on my shoulder.

"Jesse, please just hold me for awhile." Her words were muffled as she snuggled in ever closer.

I felt her body pressed full length into mine, her breasts crushed into my stomach. Her arms wrapped around my waist, she gently pressed my half-hard dick into her stomach with a light squeeze.
" Jesse - is that because of me?" She lifted her head and gazed into my eyes. " It sure feels nice to be desirable." She said without a blink.

My head was spinning, looking into those eyes. Drowning was all I could compare it to - knowing you're running out of breath, yet feeling no fear at the thought.

" I want you, Elena." The words were out of my mouth before I even thought them. I was desperate to know her reply, but horrified that I had uttered my thoughts in that way.

" I want to fuck you too, Jesse." she touched my lips with her fingertips.

Still holding me with that gaze, she guided me toward the open pantry door. She backed in, pulling me by my shirt; and with her eyes. I grabbed at her tits as she pulled the door closed behind me. She let out a soft 'oh!', and put her hands on my ass...pushing me toward her waiting body.

We kissed softly as she began to unbutton my shirt. Quickly I reciprocated and soon felt my cock rise to it's fullest, as Elena exposed her breasts to me and asked me to suck them. She lifted one to my mouth and I curled my tongue around its nipple, grasping both titties in my eager hands. As I nuzzled her, I felt her hands swiftly unfastening my belt, and I heard the buckle clatter on the floor as my pants slipped off of me. Elena dropped her shorts onto the floor as she pressed my head ever further into her breast. I raised my head and saw her nakedness, drinking in the beauty of Elena as she fingered herself. I lifted her gently by the ass, and in one swift movement pulled out the old butcher block cutting board and sat her on it's worn surface. She slid to the edge and pressed the head of my cock into to her warm flesh.

"Unh..Jesse, slide it up inside of me, Jesse. Watch it slide into me, " Her voice deep and throaty, she gave me directions. She lifted both legs and hooked them over my arms as I braced myself against the shelf behind her, offering me a clear view to her pussy.

I looked down and saw my cock slip full length into her, my body pushing against her erect clit, and making her suck in her breath.

"Watch, Jesse; fuck me while you watch." Elena let her head fall back as she arched into me.

I was fixated on the sight of my cock pumping into her. Each stroke was powerful and deep. My cock glistened with the wetness of her pussy; the small room filling with the smell of sex. The head of my cock barely leaving her cunt on every stroke, I felt her it contract as she began to orgasm.

Her nipples were bouncing with each penetration, and she rocked on her ass to receive my cock fully into her pussy. I began fucking her in earnest, my balls aching to discharge themselves deep inside of her hot, tight cunt. I watched with the fever that is lust, as she came and shivered on my cock, sucking it into her even further than before. I saw her cum drip onto the board beneath her ass, and I felt her slickness lubricate me with the hot fire of desire.

Still I pumped into her, bucking against her with each thrust, pushing all of myself into her, wanting to be completely inside of her, body and soul. She reached down and grasped the shaft of my penis with a firm, experienced grip.

"Jesse, slowly Jesse, I want you in my ass. Please fuck my ass." Her hand guided my cock toward her ass hole, which was wet from her orgasm.

Slowly I pressed the head of my prick into her hole, stopping when the head was just inside of her. She maneuvered closer to the edge of the board to give me full access to her tightness.

"Fuck my cunt with your fingers while you fuck my ass." her directions concise and demanding. "And don't stop watching, Jesse" she pushed herself farther onto my cock, while her hands guided my fingers toward her pussy.

I slipped two fingers inside of her cunt, feeling the pressure of my cock in her ass. I used my thumb to press on her clit, and drew small circles around it, varying the pressure as I slid in and out of her. I saw my cock sliding in rhythm with my fingers as I fucked her completely. My balls slapped at the edge of her precarious perch, and Elena began to come again.

"Come with me Jesse, come with me like you did this afternoon. Remember Jesse, remember?"

"Oh, Elena, I'll never forget," the words escaped my lips in one breath. " I'm coming with you, fucking you, fucking you."

I saw my cock push into her ass to the hilt and felt my hot come burn into to her and drip down onto the board, as my orgasm pumped me dry. Elena looked down too and I felt her cunt squeeze my fingers in a powerful orgasm that took her breath away. I leaned into her body, as she slowly lowered her legs to caress my body in a gentle squeeze.

I pulled my spent cock from her ass, and grabbed a dishtowel from the drawer behind her.

"Thank-you, Elena, " I said in a hoarse whisper.

She wiped herself with the dishtowel, and pulled on her shorts. She kissed my face, and gave me a warm hug, as she slipped her shirt back on.

As I bent to retrieve my clothing and rearrange the pantry, she cupped my face in her hands, slowly raising my lips to hers.

"Elena," I spoke into her soft, thick, tousled hair." Elena, I'll never forget today."

"I know" was all she said.

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